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<p> 李艳华：新东方优秀的写作老师之一。博士生在读。言语平实，内容详尽，逻辑清晰，简洁实用，经验丰富，教学成绩显著。</p>
<p> Dear accommodation officer:</p>
<p> I’m Lily, a sophomore in our university majoring in French. I’m writing to you <u>because I want to ask your help</u> (删)for changing for a new single room in next semester.</p>
<p> As for the reasons why I’d like to change my room, there’re the following points. Now I share the room with another girl. I find that living with someone else is not as pleasant as it seemed to me before, for I can’t <u>keep </u>(enjoy)my privacy and do things freely as <u>I’ve </u>(had) hoped for. Moreover, she always has friends visiting, which makes it hard for me to concentrate on my work and even to have a good rest. Last but not the least, as I want to <u>receive </u>(pursue) <u>the </u>(post)graduate education after graduation, I should prepare for the examination with a great deal of concentration from now on.</p>
<p> So I’d like to live in a single room next year. I appreciate it very much if you would help me.</p>
<p> Best</p>
<p> Wishes</p>
<p> Yours sincerely</p>
<p> Lily</p>
<p> 句子结构不错，内容也尚可，逻辑分明。</p>
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